Year 11 Novel essays

Hi All,

Here are the whiteboard notes taken from today's tutoring session:

Intro:

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5.                  , Christopher often challenges the stereotype of people with disabilities. (thesis)

Body Para 1:

1. Christopher is a character that demonstrates savantism. 
2. able to use intellect in a superior manner
   ability to do things a typical person could not
3. EG. able to solve complex math problems mentally eg. p#
4. even people without a disability would not be able to do this, let alone a person with a mental disability (or a developmental disorder)
5. if Chris was to conform to a/the stereotype, this attribute would not be present

Body Para 2:

1. Unlike other characters with disabilities, Christopher does not rely on others constantly.
2. characters like Charlie in The Black Balloon
3. eg. travels to London independently
4. even though he hasn't done it before he is successful
5. this achievement highlights his high functioning nature, not typical of people (or other characters) who are labeled disabled

Body Para 3:

1. Although Christopher is able to interact and function in society, he does present some unusual character traits
2. people with Autism often display certain characteristics and behaviours which are rational in their minds, but irrational to others
3. eg. doesn't like yellow or brown
4. the irrational obsession conforms to the criteria of an ASD diagnosis
5. this criteria highlights how Chris fits Autism, but this trait is not specific to other disabilities.

Conclusion

1. reword thesis
2. reword topic sentences
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NB.This is by no means the only way of responding or necessarily the right way of responding to the essay question. This is more a place of departure for those of you who are really stuck and unsure on how to use the framework.

Happy writing.

Miss F.